I would try also coloring the lines as well as shading. Try not using very thin lines when trying to create multi color manes and tails, Try thinking highlight streaks, but bigger. I would only use think streaks when im making a lot of highlights close together. I love how you gradient the wings and hooves as well as creating that nice looking glow feel to the hooves, Maybe try adding that to mane and tail. (just a though) If you want To make it MLP i would add a cutie mark to its rear But...
I would try also coloring the lines as well as shading. Try not using very thin lines when trying to create multi color manes and tails, Try thinking highlight streaks, but bigger. I would only use think streaks when im making a lot of highlights close together. I love how you gradient the wings and hooves as well as creating that nice looking glow feel to the hooves, Maybe try adding that to mane and tail. (just a though)
If you want To make it MLP i would add a cutie mark to its rear
Overall though i love what you did here
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